[Nikusoukyuu.] Hanazono no Mesudorei | The Slave Girls of the Flower Garden [English] {darknight} [Decensored]

You can have a “lame” self-insert character without having them be far and ugly. Just look at what hentai do all the time with the faceless guy with bangs. I just think ugly bastard detracts from any doujin, regardless of its quality.

Long and enjoyable. Perfect. Also, the guy wasnt that bad, just fat. As long as he has hair.

This is just fantastic one of the best ones I have ever read

I highly doubt it would have been great good without a ugly bastard.. stuff like this makes it even better with one

A MASTERPIECE IN EVERY SENSE OF THE WORD

Not a bad ending? Im suprised

FORTY FOUR tags... FFS!!!

Jesus, that was long as shit and doujins can still be good without a ugly and fat man so you're right about that, RLove.

This is fantastic and all, but I hope we can all ageee it would be 100x better without the ugly bastard.

Mantap bangat

Gud Shit..

Mantaplah.

FInally complete!