[Hana Hook] Hahaoya shikkaku watashi to musuko no mesu buta netorare seikyoiku [English]

Hottest shit of all time.

So this was the prequel of the other story. This is how Takashi got like that. Well I hate Kenta, in every story I saw him in. But at the very least, Takashi and his mom are happy at the end and the mom doesn't betray him :D So it's not all sad.

Even if this doujinshi is just fiction, it means something that thecharacter have some belieable reactions otherwise it is a joke not a sad story. The problem with this netorare (and many of them) is not that your main character are betrayed by his most important people (girlfriend, mother, dauther or wife), the problem is his lack of reaction. I know tha what i called problem it is something that represent netorare but i think it would be more enjoyable and with better stories if the main character react as someone normally do (with anger in most cases, violence or in some greater situation with a master plan for revenge, and i dont say that it has to be a hapy end or that he win in the end but at least that he tried).