[Yamazaki Kana] Nubatama no Yume | Pitch-Black Dream (COMIC Shingeki 2017-03) [English] {Mistvern} [Digital]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SAD T-T

@Sethuriel U da real MVP xD

Damn it,T-T

This was so fucking sad, the ending fucking shattered me man.... T-T

Damn it, the ending make me feel so sad.

Mah heart, mah soul

Why's this a doujinshi?

I guess hentai isn't just for fapping after all.

Oh, I see. This is one of those stories that makes me want to Fucking kill the author. Alright, challenge accepted.

You monster...

can i say fuck the ending ? -_-

Indeed, our Lord is watching

If Mr. Businessman lost all hope in this chapter, there will be no sequel. IF he looks for Karasu, the next chapter might have a rape and mother tag on it cuz the mother and Karasu moved out together and the guy that Karasu's mother is fucking might come too. And the reason for the rape tag is the mother of Karasu might be a slut and Karasu could get involved in the business of the Mother and her "man". Only if Kana-san has plans for a sequel fo this....

Im guessing but did he fucked himself? like the girl is an informal settler then the property that shes living is the potential land that will be meant to become a mall and since the idiot push the project he is the one liable to the lolis disappearance? THEN WHY ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT THE CHIMNEYS!!!???

hahahha dammit haha :v

The end came abrupt, and it feels rushed. A real shame towards the overall story and quality of the first few pages. Ah well, I enjoyed it.

Damn man, it's so deep that I can't even get hard. Excellent story though. But hey, we come here to fap, not to feel.

*jaw drop* I.... I... I have nothing to say....... Why??....

@gesshoku01 MVP of the comment section. My heart hurt until I read that.

Hahaa what a great ending!

@g2garuda oh your right I really need to focus on the censored lol

@JhayViruz on page 11 dude, just have a better look

@gesshoku01 Thank you for the detailed explanation of this story that no one else bothered to read.

Why do this?

wew......Is Karasu a prostitute pretending a innocent virgin?Or this doujin really didnt include blood because shes a loli?well her first time didnt even show a blood(like her hym hym is a unbreakable barrier) from A Penis taht is too big for her?.....Is she really a virgin since the start of the story?Its just by the looks of it her mother is kinda like a slut and have sex at home....wonder if her mother is out what will a helpless blind girl will do to depend herself in the invorenment she lives in?Cant really be surprise if shes been reped a few times by her mother....uh lover or random perverts?.....And about the idiot who didnt even know the location......Fuck he should have known the location for reference of his design...or maybe im just thinking too much about this...maybe his design have been first approve before the location but still he should have known before he inform Karasu about it and probably just take karasu(or even her mother...probably not) away from that place.

So Much Feel :(

I'm broken inside

Damn feels!!!!! Also we need a sequel 2

There you go guys, fixed the ending: http://oi63.tinypic.com/16716de.jpg Yw

Idiot just go and find her instead of crying

I hope that chapter 2 is on it's way.

Why do people write this stuff? Getting off isn't about this bullshit. Stop righting bullshit sappy crap and write what we want. FAP MATERIAL.

no godfkin damit, this needs a sequel.

Another punch in guts manga, God I hate them But I love so much too.

Sad ending, I can't work with this one so gg wp this manga fulfill it's objective

please tell me there is a sequel, I hate ending a fap session with sad feels

that end tho

This one almost made me cry. I love it!

I came to fap not to feel

THIS IS WHY YOU FUKKEN READ ALL THE DETAILS.

I... I want chap 2, this end is so shit

WTF, i demand SEQUEL!

Intended to fap, but got feels instead. GG

Woe is me, for I fell into a feels trap yet again

@karanashi, i doubt this manga has a sequel. Cuz, i mean it shud had a " To be continue ". Tbh, this ending is very anti climactic. Everything went 360 degree turn in just a split second with no hesitation to slow down. Here's MC, here's loli, here's sexy time, here's feels, AND BAM. The end.

what are these feels

i hope this have a sequel

Come on guys, the ending isn't that bad, it's bittersweet sure but she said she would be back so it's fine...

censorship is cancer

Alright. Good, just hope that he finds her after he finds out that he went to the wrong location.

You should have taken that girl home by page 15, you moron. Way to ruin a good hentai.

AGAIN. NOT A SAD ENDING. MC IS STUPID AF. HE MISTOOK THE PLACE.

I need a continuation m8. It can't end like this...

This is the tweet: (jap) https://cuty.io/x6cHW

comment by the user "Raey" on the Ex-H comment section on this: Judging from the Author's Tweet, I think he was referring to the chimneys of a powerplant. There were THREE chimneys each time he visits her, and there were no huge building near the pwoer plant (see all the images when the background has that Powerplant). In the last panel, The "Power Plant" had FOUR chimneys, and there were those mid-sized buildings near it when there were none each tim ehe visits her. So either 1. He went to the wrong place (he said he didnt really remember where he went each night) or 2. He went to the wrong side of the place (maybe he usually went there from the north, and he went from the south) So Karasu is fine because the MC is stupid. Like the author said, "This is not a tragedy story." EDIT: Notice how there were also never any smokes frmo the Chimneys whenever he visits Karasu, then there were smokes from the "shimneys" on the last panel. So the answer is 1, he simply went to the wrong place.

I knew what was gonna happen in the end, but that didn't stop it from hurting.

damn.....a ch2 would be great

Dayum...Bad End

What a twist~!

ok what the fuck... how can you kill my boner in 1 sec..

oh my god the feels

@the archangel : i'll explain, that guy is a junior architect so he don't know where the mall will be built which is ironic on the last page he knew that the land for the mall are that girl's house. but why the fck they planning to build a mall which near a factory building?

What I don't get is why he didn't take her home from the very beginning. Isn't that a custom for lonely, mistreated lolis on anime/manga/etc?

And thats why you should pay attention to what you do.

> 100% fap time. > ending. > 200% fap time. Need chapter 2 with her corpse

"Some of the worst things you can imagine are done with the best of intentions in mind"

This ending stole my boner.

that ending, holy... where's the ntr tag?

Congratulations you just murdered lots of vanilla lover with this story

I will be sure i will not post this on our FB Group lol someone might get mad at me xD but good story .. but the ending is..... kinda..... ughh :V my eyes!!

Well, i tought reading a hentai of a blind loli is bad, NO. THIS VERY HENTAI IS BEYOND TRAGIC. holy fuck where do i put this. This h manga manage to kill my boner, worse than any fucked up h manga with scat ntr n shits. What in the actual fuck man

That man just destroy the Slum with his own Mall Project he had been working on. So it's entirely his fault. So I've read from e-hentai comment

Lo bueno es que me la termine de jalar antes de llegar al final, pobre pndj.

Sad Ending T-T

Mah hart Mah sol

Just make a happy ending please where they find each other then get in a relationship or married with a happy life.

What the fuck just happened? What happened?Where did she go? We need ch2 RIGHT NOW.

and there goes my boner

Why???? Why???? Its a great story until the end!! Goddamnit!!!!!!!!! I lost my will for everything now

This is worse than hardcore NTR.....Why the fuck would you write such a touching story and then end it like that. What the actual fuck....

damn this is sad as hell. how to fap after that ending? HOW?

so sad ; w ;

B.... But why?

Hahahahaha no need another chapter ASAP. It cannot end like this.

That ending is not fucking okay

For some reason I lost the will to fap after that ending. And fck this is the first doujin I've read today. I need chapter 2 or RIOT!!

Ending was funny rather than sad. and fucking ironic too.

We need chapter 2 now, i have to know what happens...

NotLikeThis, I want more, can't fap to this :'v

Too sad to fap

Now that's just sad. :(

I can't fap to this. Porn with some depth and you can't fap to it. Just like 'Emergence' by ShindoL.

Is it telling me that they kicked her out and she is now gone`?

NO. How can it end like that?? I need ch. 2

:( why must it end so sadly

Awww, that's sweet