Mai Favorite [English] [Rewrite] [Tremalkinger]

Glad Ravenleaf wrote his comments, or I might've hastily done the same. Honestly, Gunma's always a pretty mediocre writer at best, so in this rare case I'm okay with this.

kisaragi gunma is one of my first and favorites art work. i felt in love with his/her giri-giri sisters work. this art work is 11/10

I must say I like this story better than original one

@Therapistman yeah, they can't translate so they take the work and make up their own story to match the images. Usually they are very bad and with terrible grammar.

What's a rewrite though? Is it when you change the story of an existing doujin?

enough with this re-write bullshit!!!

nhentai need to delete this rewrite bullshit.

...and then I read the note from the guy that did. I feel *slightly* guilty, I wrote my comic before I saw that, but still, this stuff is shit 99% of the time, and I'm still not going to read this.

Fuck Rewrites. Seriously. You can't translate, you're stealing other peoples work, you disgrace the artist and frankly the work is usually an insult to the community's intelligence. Go fuck yourselves.