[Harusawa] Hachigatu, Kanojo wa Uso wo tsuku. [English] [SaHa]
[ハルサワ] 八月、彼女は嘘をつく。[英訳]
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Remember, a NTR genre can be enjoyable IF the bitch just leave the man. But in this case it's beyond stupid
The problem I have with most of NTR works is the weak character and/or story development. To be frank, it goes beyond the NTR genre: I've got myself skipping pages in a lot of others genres. Nevertheless, this is a good work but I've got the impression that the author had already written the end but couldn't think of a way to make the story reach it, and then he/she made some poorly choices that some of you already pointed out. Like the boyfriend that came out of nowhere in the end, almost a Deus Ex Machina, and the heroine making some idiotic choices, a commonplace in the NTR genre. I don't like when I can "see the strings" being pulled on the characters, it takes out the suspension of disbelief and instead enjoying the story I end up raging at the author.
Oh I remember the stabbing scene, why ? why are you suddenly stop craving for cock, bitch ? I thought you were just seconds ago, now fearing for your life ? and for that stabbed-guy, come on man, go fuck her, why are you stopping after you got stabbed ? it's only a stab, won't hurt right ? Pffft, after hundred of agonizing pages, I'm glad she stab the brother, she could've use a katana tho, but in the end nobody dies, sigh.
Phew I've read this one sometime ago, not expecting to see this shit again, it baffles me to think back then I could handle this lot pages of ntr lol
+emurder99 Lol calm down dude, if you angry the author of this manga just gonna smirk and happy as fuck just from looking how fucked the manga is. It's no different than a troll, they just want to see your angry reactions when you see their shit. Simple way is fuck this author and leave it
It's simple my friend, if you like this kind of shit....you're fucked up in real life. Trust me
Wow....amazing. dont remember i've read this or not. But, for sure i'll fav this. Keep it up. I like your work!
I am wondering how some authors can come up with these kind of stories. Fetish? I dont think so. I also dun get it why some people claim that they can enjoy this kind of genre, like wtf "this is fiction, you must be new in the Internet" bs is so overused as an excuse.