[Hana Hook] Hahaoya Shikkaku - Watashi to Musuko no Mesu Buta Netorare Fukushuugeki [English] [Digital]
[華フック] 母親失格・私と息子のメス豚寝取られ復讐劇 [英訳] [DL版]
Of all the NTR of Hana Hook, this one was actually satisfying. I hate bullies. I really do so this was a nice revenge story, plus her family took her for granted. The only turn off was the mentioning of Kenta from the other story. This and the other full color revenge story by Hana Hook with the 2 moms the childhood friend and the teacher are my 2 favorites of Hana Hook. But the one with Kenta SERIOUSLY fucks me up every time.
Even if this doujinshi is just fiction, it means something that thecharacter have some belieable reactions otherwise it is a joke not a sad story. The problem with this netorare (and many of them) is not that your main character are betrayed by his most important people (girlfriend, mother, dauther or wife), the problem is his lack of reaction. I know tha what i called problem it is something that represent netorare but i think it would be more enjoyable and with better stories if the main character react as someone normally do (with anger in most cases, violence or in some greater situation with a master plan for revenge, and i dont say that it has to be a hapy end or that he win in the end but at least that he tried).
can you change the plot, like Kimiko fuck takashi without yuichi now about it. and Kaori go to yuichi because she feel betrayed by takashi, and both off them living whit they own lover and get pregnant. PS :i like your draw
This one has it all, my pesonal favorite.