[Sioyaki Ayu] Houkago no Akumu - After school nightmare (Otokonoko HELL'S GATE #01) [English] [mysterymeat3] [Digital]

@HentaiCrepes TL;DR No one is asking you to rate or critique porn. Shut the fuck up.

I've already checked this out in the Hell's Gate anthology and in the chinese translated version but this is one of sioyaki ayu's most underwhelming works, not that it's bad it just doesn't do anything that much that has been done better in Ayu's previous works before, examples would be Love Doll in which the way I see it is his best work and Yume no Oshiro - Dream Castle from Otokonoko HEAVEN Vol. 37 in which despite throwing in the claim of having the lack of variety in sex positions did achieve enough build up to make the climax more exciting by the way it used lighting, dick holding and having a proper combination of characters :^) this one on the otherhand did have similar qualities but handled them very poorly, an example would be the pair having sex, the imbalance size between their genitals was very horrendous to look at, and the lighting is very plain compared to his old works overall it's just eh... I'm feelin'a light 6/10 on this one.