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alishka11
https://cuty.io/tfs6WZUU9
MushroomCube
Why are so many people hating on this? I prefer a rewrite to having no english version of this at all.
LalA
there is no translation. he just made up and used his revisions. fuck him. I repeat it's not a translation it's a rewrite. check this: https://cpmlink.net/y26NAQ
ProxyPi
What was changed from the original? I thought this was pretty good.
koppylol
rewriters deserve leukemia!
Rand0mDick
I like how we are all focused on the writing of the hentia. 3D porn has very little dialogue if any. "If you just turn the sound off of incest porn then its just porn."
eclair994
too crazy....hahahahahaha but if author add "ahegao" genre..idk what will happen
Fjellkein
I'm going straight to hell.
TigaMaskman
+couto886 Just like it sound, rewrite is an act of altering of words and dialogues of original work to become different from the original. It might be better or worse than what it suppose to be. Whether it would be good or bad, depends solely on rewriter.
Kirbin all day
Its weird how she knows so much about sexual pleasure, despite being so dense. Makes me think she was teasing him on purpose.
tochi676
Pffff another great doujinshi with the lazy ass rewrite ...
SanMig
fbi look at my collection of lolis it's greaaat.
couto886
I'm new in this shit so I'm still trying to get familiar with the terms. What exactly is "Rewrite"?? Somebody really changed the whole story??
Not someone to trust
Wait, she was no virgin when they fucked at first.... S L U T D E T E C T E D ! ! !
random_pervert
Rewrites suck balls. If you can't be bothered to do a proper translation what is the point? The entire point of scanlation is to share the mangaka's story/vision. Rewrites are a disease.
jonnyboy
I don't care if you call the PoPo! I'm gonna fap to this. Oppai lolis are the only only lolis for me.