(C93) [Shoot The Moon (Fuetakishi)] Touchuukasou 2 [English] [Doujins.com]

@lSpawnl i'm sure the sister will fall too, and i bet my left testicle that the final scene will be a threesome and the kid crying and doing absolutely nothing about it, like 99% of boyfriends, husbands, childhood friends do in this genre. Sigh...

are we bout to have a ch3 with the other sis now

... D A T A S S !

Just realized something too. Give the kid brother glasses, and hes an exact clone of the MC from Elf High, except here hes a clueless waste of space that shouldnt exist. But for real, If they give the 2nd sister more attention, im seriously hoping she doesnt turn into a clone of her sister, especially in terms of piss poor decision making and sticks to her guns (she seems like the smart one of the 2).

I know the art is good. It's wasted on this shitty story.

The art is good, its just the writing feels so forced its pathetic. Apparently the creators working on chapter 3, so heres to hoping its not as bad as this one in terms of execution.

what a waste of good art. this guy use to be a vanilla god back in the day.

And before anyone assumes its NTR and cries, its not. No ones romantically attracted to anyone, even sexually (aside from the 2 obvious). Literally fuck buddies at this point. Only gripe is the cliche "lets keep it a secret" and "Im doing this to protecc" bullshit. Why beat around the bush when you can just come out with it lol

Im guessing there will be a 3rd chapter. But seriously, the little brother shouldve just been a faceless character. The kids not important, not relevant and as the writing for this is so lame and sloppy like, TWICE he didnt see the obvious. Sneaking around your own house? Obviously hearing them fucking and then thinking your IMAGINING IT? when you walk in and their BOTH half naked? Cmon dude. You cant be that goddamn dense and clueless. Seriously hoping if or when the 2nd sister gets involved, its not as 1 tracked or braindead, so far shes the only redeeming character in terms of, actual character and shes rarely shown

This can't be the end right? My boy deserves vengance.