(C90) [KONOWATA (Mazaki Katsumi)] Imaginary Line (NEW GAME!) [English] [The Committee of Moe]

Well yeah, the thing is, we did it rather quickly so it doesn't help, sorry for that. Also, we're not native English, that's another problem… And yes, the artwork could be better, but since there are so few NewGame! doujins we decided to did it anyway… ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Can't get enough of Hifumi though. :D

Hmm, while the majority of it is fine, when I compare it to others there's something about the way their communication is put together that's seems really rather strange. I also feel the artwork is quite awkward which doesn't help at all, though not particularly bad per se'.

HentaiSoul, if I may ask, can you tell us what parts were "pretty awkwardly translated"?

Yeah, but when Yuri is good, mm, it is GOOD. It was pretty awkwardly translated too.

shit was weak like most